This Kan outside voice 2004/06/1801:16
I feel thousand leaves although the not exactly is a much excellent girl, but she seems to be specially inside the show, will have emotional stirrings towards living specially like this, the missing of that Mo mind lies in her and then will seem to be specially deeply, however she seems to be again is the person being special to bear one, so again can't special of pain and sufferings.
Write:Isn't very good so? Forest recreation class 2004/06/1822:02
Than the other people have morely to the living realization, bear pain and sufferings that this kind of realization brings again, seemed to be than the other people to live more several ＾s that living several a life time ＾s.
So far, thousand foliar lives can say to just be slowly launching.
Read:Sigh, tell the truth an outside voice of Kan 2004/06/1823:07
I but don't wish to be such, that Mo comprehends more that Mo much pain and sufferings is too heavy to life, I think a simple happiness, why want to live more than the other people to be several to living several a life times?I connect live this only a life times all feel too endless, hopes hurry in the end.
Write:You ……young forest recreation class 2004/06/1923:13
Will there is so cynical viewpoint, too should not, Mo.I remember that the university saw quite for ages and the Shao soldier's 《red river valley 》 and looking at blue sky, white cloud,****Of strong beautiful scene, suddenly to life matchless have a passion for.You also have a look, perhaps will also effectively, smile.
I pour is rejoice I is a person of sensitive, the center of palm spreads, the fine line is airtight to knit, well and all badly comprehend much than the ordinary people, feel not to waste time this in this world a＾＾ .
Read: Should not Mo? Kan outside voice 2004/06/2001:34
Probably, my emotion always fluctuates, even if appreciate beautiful scenery again, also just momentary of emotion upsurge just, inside always still gray, can not change.Life Mo, I never think to have many Mos Be worth reluctanting to part with of, I don't feel as well to will have much meaning, seem to be to the Shi Mos all doesn't matter, but think greatly of a lot of things again, usually feel self-contradict, so is specially tired, so combine to not too reluctant to part with to the life!
Read:This is a good book.Is green puckery, muddled, intense emotion, making open of youth -bluefire
Read:Is very good, although details aren't very detailed,details have much of an attraction, if the result that don't introduce a behind, for example don't say later how later how of, probably more have an attraction, the words after all knewed everything, saw a head for the nothing important, rightness? -The ordinary mortal worries
Write:I and some readers say that this novel will have a little running accounts like a growth, but details broken up, seem to have been my fatal injury, smile.As for the result that are or so to suddenly start introducing a behind from 16 chapters, sweat, already drive some readers greatly for once denounce.I originally also wanted to have been monotonous and made the result what happens without extra effort.Suddenly there is the desire of explaination somehow or other, so, Mo.However, write to also have an advantage like this:It a, if details are fair, easily make the reader produce to feel sorry for of heart, arouse sympathy to, after all, grow up road up, who have no so of miss?It two, can urge to living another hang to read:Leading lady still opportunity to have, will be not standing alone eventually old?＾＾ Of playing trick, have been already written so, can go toward this road up continue to go up, back 10,000 to say, also have the university the article and social article, want ～only still on the hoof, thousand leaves always also have an opportunity, sweat.Like this write to take have a little the property of recollection, but the beginning of regrettable novel didn't narrate from the end of the evidence is really failure and sigh. -Plum yellow timely rain
Read:[Essence]chapter 46 in empress the parts of grandmother have a conversation with thousand leaves medium 1"seem so.Tree, do you know?None of men is to have much of patience, you are again good, he likes you again, also isn't likely to have been waiting you, lifetime what of, pull more to talk.Said again, this in this world of good woman, not only you are 1." Talk idly two words to come from at the elder to the dialogue of younger generation and really is be unsuited to proper. no61 <6-18 10:45>
Write:I checked 《modern Chinese language phrase Dian 》 , it was claver and the meaning for falling into conversation to pull to talk;But talk idly is in the dialect of carefree the meaning for pull, gossiping irresponsibly, sweat.Use to talk idly certainly such as you say, be unsuited to very much proper;But I use to pull to talk, the root then is wrong.Sometimes want to loaf on job for a while, have never thought immediately a long distance of Miu, Mo.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1922:39& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]in fact this comment, for is a male of I, take pleasure in accept.The girl is too easily acted with dignity tired, however always feel this sentence in, female played a pre-eminent role to, from the romance point of view, told white of mostly is male, even if is happy natural rivals, is the male it one square the love direction after 21th century that first compromised that have the trend to change direction?However I will not refuse that the favorite female kid tells white to me~and also hold an encouraging attitude~the male is to have reserved of~invulnerable<6-1900:24& amps;gt;
Write:It is said that the male in fact cares for the face more than the female, and the mental state is weaker, this words may have certain truth.Will don't become a suicide because of the love in the near future for example, kill people of in the case, commit crime one party to seem a male mostly.(be also likely to be medium to feel male for love criminal of the case is worther to report also perhaps, sweat)I is even once this and some colleagues talked over.A male colleague says that this is contemporary male the compatriot compare female the compatriot think greatly of more affective of the "true" embodiment ＾＾ .I pour to have never thought that sentence to have the female plays pre-eminent role of suspicion, just feel, if truely met a favorite boy, really is should on one's own initiative at 1:00, otherwise become other people of, sweat.However, the all things is said to easily do difficult, so, in fact thousand leaves female female a pair didn't attain and said to is also a white to say, Mo.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1922:51& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]how all had no for these two days, 5555~~~do I still wait so late for these two days? Chen star 04& amps;lt;6-1922:08& amps;gt;
Write:Is ashamed, stop for these two days, this novel wrote a place of turn, so come to a stop to conceive outline details of behind.Although I compose the process that the novel conceives outline, a little bit is like oneself to broadcast a television drama in the brain, however, the novel still wants to spend more a little times coherent, otherwise, appear to lack consistency very easily before or after to of circumstance, sweat.Since tomorrow ＾＾ .The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1922:54& amps;gt;
Write:Article second volume in high school basically conceive outline good, probably at 62 chapter or so be over.The ego felling is mild boring, may make the reader see drowsy, sweat.Hope can let details live a new life to move while truely communicating officially.Probably university article will more the drama turn some ＾＾ .Certainly don't embrace a high expectation, either, because this novel, I basically didn't arrange too great details great waves, is the life that enriches 1:00 more than the common run of people, only this and no more just ＾＾ .The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-2000:43& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]really throw a person, incredibly have never seen clear to talk and thin-_-#@//no 61& amps;lt;6-2000:24& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]I think if is grandmother to say to the niece, because the will use, talking nonsense these three words is better. no61 &,Beats by Dr Dre solo;lt;6-20 00:27>
Write:I use to pull to talk two words in this chapter, originally is want that embodying grandmother's people of this generation culture isn't this characteristics in height, had never thought adverse effect, Mo.However, I still feel that the "gossip irresponsibly" is better.Because"talked nonsense" and behind of"again said" layer after layer.When I revise preliminary draft habitually what to use is read method ＾＾ , can read fluent and the most importantly,
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